i found the missing piece of the puzzle

.gitignore

@@ -1,2 +1,4 @@
 .DS_Store
 \#*
+recordings/
+

for-mix2.tidal

@@ -11,7 +11,6 @@ http://anny.audio
 
 cps (99/60)
 let every' n o f = when ((== (o-1)) . (`mod` n)) f
-hush
 
 {-
 some defs cause i'm starting to lose track of all the copy pasta
@@ -52,7 +51,9 @@ let eg g = gap 128 $ s "eg*2"
            # cut "4"
 
 -- other guitar
-let gt g = chop 128 $ s "[gt [~ gt] ! ~]/2"
+let gt g = every 2 (within (0, 0.5) (0.07 <~)) $ (0.07 ~>) $
+           chop 128 $
+           s "[gt [~ gt] ! ~]/2"
            # gain g
            # cut "5"
 
@@ -65,6 +66,8 @@ let pcbeep = slow 16 $ gap 48 $ s "pc:1"
 here goes i guess
 -}
 
+hush
+
 d3 $ bassbass
 d2 $ hhb False
 d3 $ bassbass'
@@ -88,21 +91,26 @@ d1 $ overlay ((0.5 ~>) $ s "sn/2") $ morek $ s "k"
 
 d6 $ ududu
 
--- fade up to gain 0.8
+d9 $ chop 16 $ s "[wb wb:1 ~ ~]/4" # gain "0.9"
-d4 $ density 0.25 $ eg "0.8"
+d9 $ chop 16 $ s "[wb [wb:1 wb:2] ~ ~]/4" # gain "0.9"
+
+d4 $ density 0.25 $ eg "0.7"
+
+d9 $ every' 4 4 (0.32 ~>) $ chop 16 $ s "[wb [wb:1 wb:2] ~ [wb:1 wb:2]]/4" # gain "0.9"
 
 d4 $ (# speed ((+0.8).(/2) <$> slow 4 saw1)) $
-  density 0.25 $ eg "0.8"
+  density 0.25 $ eg "0.7"
 
 d4 $ (# speed ((+0.8).(/2) <$> slow 4 saw1)) $
   density 0.25 $
-  slowspread density [1, 2, 0.5, 2] $ eg "0.8"
+  slowspread density [1, 2, 0.5, 2] $ eg "0.7"
 
-d6 $ (every' 3 2 . sometimesBy 0.5 $ density (4%3)) $ ududu
+d9 $ every' 4 4 (0.32 ~>) $ chop 16 $ s "[wb [wb:1 wb:2] ~ [wb:1 wb:2]]/4" # gain "0.9"
+  # speed "[1 1 2]/3"
 
 d4 $ (# speed ((+0.8).(/2) <$> slow 4 saw1)) $
   density 0.245 $ -- !
-  slowspread density [1, 2, 0.5, 2] $ eg "0.8"
+  slowspread density [1, 2, 0.5, 2] $ eg "0.7"
 
 d1 $ overlay ((1 ~>) $ s "cy/8") $
   overlay ((0.5 ~>) $ s "sn/2") $ morek $ s "k"
@@ -113,65 +121,82 @@ mapM_ ($ silence) [d2,d3]
 d4 $ (0.18 <~) $ every 2 (const silence) $
   (# speed ((+0.8).(/2) <$> slow 4 saw1)) $
   density 0.245 $
-  slowspread density [1, 2, 0.5, 2] $ eg "0.8"
+  slowspread density [1, 2, 0.5, 2] $ eg "0.75"
 
 d1 $ overlay ((0.5 ~>) $ s "sn/2") $ morek $ s "k"
+d6 $ (every' 3 2 . sometimesBy 0.5 $ density (4%3)) $ ududu
 d1 $ overlay ((0.5 ~>) $ s "sn/2") $ every' 12 2 (density 3) $ morek $ s "k"
 
 d7 $ pcbeep
-d7 $ slowspread (\x -> within x (slow 2)) [(0.25, 0.5), (0.75, 1), (0.25, 0.75)] $ pcbeep
+d7 $ slowspread (\x -> within x (slow 1.5)) [(0.25, 0.5), (0.75, 1), (0.25, 0.75)] $ pcbeep
 
 d6 $ (every' 3 2 . sometimesBy 0.5 $ density (4%3)) $
   (whenmod 7 5 $ trunc (5%6)) $ ududu
 
-d6 $ (every' 5 3 $ brak) $
-  (every' 3 2 . sometimesBy 0.5 $ density (4%3)) $
-  (whenmod 7 5 $ trunc (5%6)) $ ududu
-
 d7 $ slowspread ($) [rev, id, brak, (0.25 ~>), id] $
-  slowspread (\x -> within x (slow 2)) [(0.25, 0.5), (0.75, 1), (0.25, 0.75)] $ pcbeep
+  slowspread (\x -> within x (slow 1.5)) [(0.25, 0.5), (0.75, 1), (0.25, 0.75)] $ pcbeep
+
+d9 $ every' 4 4 (0.32 ~>) $ chop 16 $ s "[wb [wb:1 wb:2] ~ [[wb:1 wb:1/2] wb:2]]/4" # gain "0.9"
+  # speed "[1 1 2]/3"
 
 d7 $ whenmod 7 5 (density 1.25) $
   slowspread ($) [rev, id, brak, (0.25 ~>), id] $
-  slowspread (\x -> within x (slow 2)) [(0.25, 0.5), (0.75, 1), (0.25, 0.75)] $ pcbeep
+  slowspread (\x -> within x (slow 1.5)) [(0.25, 0.5), (0.75, 1), (0.25, 0.75)] $ pcbeep
+
+d5 $ gt "0.75"
+
+d5 $ gt "0.75"
+  # speed ((+1).(/4) <$> slow 1.95 sinewave1)
+
+-- OOOOOOHHHH MY FUCK
+d9 $ (sometimesBy 0.6 $ superimpose (rev . slow (5%4))) $
+  every' 4 4 (0.32 ~>) $ chop 16 $ s "[wb [wb:1 wb:2] ~ [[wb:1 wb:1/2] wb:2]]/4" # gain "0.9"
+  # speed "[1 1 2]/3"
+
+d2 $ iter 4 $ (# pan (density 16 "0.25 0.75")) $ whenmod 16 15 (density 3) $ hhb True
 
 d3 $ whenmod 4 2 (density 3) $ whenmod 3 2 (slow 2) $ bassbass'
 
--- bye const
-d4 $ (0.18 <~) $
-  (# speed ((+0.8).(/2) <$> slow 4 saw1)) $
-  density 0.245 $
-  slowspread density [1, 2, 0.5, 2] $ eg "0.8"
-
--- fade up to 0.75 (or 0.8? used to be 0.8 but its pretty loud)
-d5 $ gt "0.75"
-
 -- funkier bassline w slowspread lambda, thanks yaxu. thaxu
 d3 $ slowspread (\x -> within (0.5, 1) (x)) [id, slow 2 . brak] $
   whenmod 4 2 (density 3) $ whenmod 3 2 (slow 2) $ bassbass'
 
-d5 $ gt "0.75"
+d6 $ (every' 5 3 $ brak) $
-  # speed ((+1).(/4) <$> slow 1.95 sinewave1)
+  (every' 3 2 . sometimesBy 0.5 $ density (4%3)) $
+  (whenmod 7 5 $ trunc (5%6)) $ ududu
+
+-- bye const
+d4 $ (0.18 <~) $
+  (# speed ((+0.8).(/2) <$> slow 4 saw1)) $
+  density 0.245 $
+  slowspread density [1, 2, 0.5, 2] $ eg "0.7"
 
 d5 $ density 0.98 $ gt "0.75"
   # speed ((+1).(/4) <$> slow 1.95 sinewave1)
 
-d2 $ iter 4 $ (# pan (density 16 "0.25 0.75")) $ whenmod 16 15 (density 3) $ hhb True
+mapM_ ($ silence) [d4,d9]
 
--- outro drum line, could be variabl...ized cause no way i can type this all out live
 d1 $ stack [
   every' 8 7 (overlay $ (0.32 ~>) $ s "k") $ s "[k ~ k*2 ~]/4",
   every' 16 16 (overlay $ (0.82 ~>) $ s "sn") $ (1 ~>) $ s "sn/2"
   ]
 
-mapM_ ($ silence) [d4,d5]
+d8 $ slow 16 . gap 64 $ s "pclow"
+  # gain "0.8"
+
+d8 $ superimpose (slow (10%9) . rev) $ slow 16 . gap 64 $ s "pclow"
+  # gain "0.8"
+
+d8 $ superimpose (slow (10%9) . rev) $ slow 16 . gap 64 $ s "pclow"
+  # gain "0.8"
+  # speed "1 1.5"
+
+mapM_ ($ silence) [d3,d6,d7]
 
 d8 $ slow 16 . gap 64 $ s "pclow"
   # gain "0.8"
 
-mapM_ ($ silence) [d6,d7]
+mapM_ ($ silence) [d2,d5]
-d2 silence
-
 hush
 
 {-
@@ -181,3 +206,9 @@ scratch area to keep stuff that's interesting but maybe doesn't fit in
 -- totally different drum line, feelwise. even though it's nearly the same
 -- kinda don't like it but not gonna chuck it yet, got a nice hip hop bent
 d1 $ overlay ((1 ~>) $ s "sn/2") $ morek $ s "k"
+
+-- outro drum line, could be variabl...ized cause no way i can type this all out live
+d1 $ stack [
+  every' 8 7 (overlay $ (0.32 ~>) $ s "k") $ s "[k ~ k*2 ~]/4",
+  every' 16 16 (overlay $ (0.82 ~>) $ s "sn") $ (1 ~>) $ s "sn/2"
+  ]