From 6865b9ed4962d590d871e40cef6304fc8ceb8bd6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Aneurin Barker Snook <a@aneur.in>
Date: Fri, 9 Jun 2017 17:45:32 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] simplify comments for readability

---
 battery123.tidal | 63 +++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------------
 1 file changed, 30 insertions(+), 33 deletions(-)

diff --git a/battery123.tidal b/battery123.tidal
index a9b27fb..5eef1e2 100644
--- a/battery123.tidal
+++ b/battery123.tidal
@@ -25,8 +25,7 @@ let bpm b = cps (b/60)
 
 {-
 @b1
-Anny FM: Battery 1
-anny.audio
+Battery 1
 -}
 
 bpm 125
@@ -146,8 +145,7 @@ d'drum silence
 
 {-
 @b2
-Anny FM: Battery 2
-anny.audio
+Battery 2
 -}
 
 bpm 125
@@ -180,7 +178,7 @@ let b = brak . iter 4 -- (1)
 
 d'warb silence
 
--- ~b2drum w/o peri
+-- b2drum w/o peri
 
 -- @b2trump
 d'tr $ cf $ whenmod 5 4 rev $ s "[~ trump ! !] ~"
@@ -190,8 +188,8 @@ d'tr $ cf $ whenmod 5 4 rev $ s "[~ trump ! !] ~"
   # shape 0.6
   -- # speed (scale 0.5 1.5 $ slow 4 sine1) -- (1)
 
--- ~b2drum w/ peri
--- ~b2perc w/ b=brak . iter 4
+-- b2drum w/ peri
+-- b2perc w/ b=brak . iter 4
 
 d'bass $ slow 8 $
   s "[jvbass ~] [jvbass [~ ~ ~ ~ jvbass]] [~ [~ ~ ~ ~ jvbass]] [~ jvbass !]"
@@ -216,22 +214,21 @@ d'arpy $ cf $ s "arpy*8"
 
 msil [d'perc, d'bass]
 
--- ~b2drum w/o peri
+-- b2drum w/o peri
 
 -- @b2arpy
 d'arpy $ cf $ iter 9 $ s "arpy*8"
   # n "2 1 3 1"
   # gain 0.7
 
--- ~b2perc @ (1)
--- ~b2drum w/ peri
+-- b2perc @ 1
+-- b2drum w/ peri
 
 msil [d'drum, d'perc]
 
 {-
 @b3
-Anny FM: Battery 3
-anny.audio
+Battery 3
 -}
 
 bpm 125
@@ -243,7 +240,7 @@ d'arpy $ cf $
   # n "2 1 3 1"
   # gain 0.7
 
--- ~b1perc3
+-- b1perc3
 d'perc $ cf $
   slow 2 . spread slow [2,4,2,3] $
   jux (0.25 <~) $
@@ -263,27 +260,27 @@ d'bass $ cf $
   # speed 1.2
   # shape 0.2
 
--- ~b3bass @ (1)
+-- b3bass @ 1
 
 d'drum $ cf $ sound "[tok*2 [rm tok]] [psr:1 tok*2]"
   # n (slow 3 $ run 4)
 
--- ~b3bass @ (2)
--- ~b3bass @ (3)
+-- b3bass @ 2
+-- b3bass @ 3
 
--- ~b1hand
+-- b1hand
 d'hand $ slow 8 $ rev . striate 256 $ s "hand*8"
   # speed 0.7
   # shape (scale 0 0.5 $ slow (10/4) sine1)
   # pan (scale 0.25 0.75 $ slow (8/3) sine1)
 
--- ~b1tac
+-- b1tac
 d'tac $ cf . whenmod 7 4 (density 1.5) $
   s "[~ tacscan] ! ~ ~"
   # gain 0.8
   # vowel (slow 3 "e u")
 
--- ~b3arpy @ (1)
+-- b3arpy @ 1
 
 msil [d'bass, d'hand]
 
@@ -301,11 +298,11 @@ d'drum $ cf $
   sound "[tok*2 [rm tok]] [psr:1 tok*2]"
   # n (slow 3 $ run 4)
 
--- ~b1hand
--- ~b1perc3 @ (1)
+-- b1hand
+-- b1perc3 @ 1
 
--- ~b3bass
--- ~b1tac
+-- b3bass
+-- b1tac
 
 -- @b3bassloud
 d'bass $ cf $
@@ -332,30 +329,30 @@ d'drum $ cf $
 
 msil [d'bass, d'arpy]
 
--- ~b3drumfull @ (5)
+-- b3drumfull @ 5
 
 d'hand silence
 
--- ~b2perc1
+-- b2perc1
 d'perc $ cf $
   slow 2 . spread slow [2,4,2,3] $
   jux (0.25 <~) $
   slow 2 $ s "uxay [~ uxay] [psr uxay] ~"
   # n (density 3 $ run 2)
 
--- ~b3drum2
+-- b3drum2
 d'drum $ cf $
   overlay (slow 2 $ s "peri*2 [~ ~ ~ peri] [~ peri peri ~] ~") $
   sound "[tok*2 [rm tok]] [psr:1 tok*2]"
   # n (slow 3 $ run 4)
 
--- ~b2perc @ (1)
--- ~b2bass @ (2)
--- ~b1tac
--- ~b1bass1 [on channel d'bass2]
--- ~b3arpy @ (1)
--- ~b1warbler
--- ~b1hand
+-- b2perc @ 1
+-- b2bass @ 2
+-- b1tac
+-- b1bass1 [on channel d'bass2]
+-- b3arpy @ 1
+-- b1warbler
+-- b1hand
 
 msil [d'perc, d'bass, d'tac, d'bass2, d'hand]
 d'drum silence