part 2.a is turning out pretty good

piston.tidal

@@ -52,12 +52,12 @@ d1 $ sound "[k(3,8)]/2"
 d1 $ sound "{k(3,8), [~ sn]}/2"
 d1 $ sound "{k(3,8), [~ ~ sn [~ sn*3]/2]}/2"
 
+d3 $ (every 2 $ within (0.25, 0.75) (0.5 ~>)) $ slow 8 $ rev . chop 16 $ bassParams $ sound "[dubb dubb:1]/2"
+
 d1 $ within (0.5, 1) (chop 8) $ sound "{k(3,8), [~ ~ sn [~ sn*3]/2]}/2"
 
 d5 silence
 
-d3 $ (every 2 $ within (0.25, 0.75) (0.5 ~>)) $ slow 8 $ rev . chop 16 $ bassParams $ sound "[dubb dubb:1]/2"
-
 d1 $ within (0.5, 1) (chop 8) $ sound "{[[k*2 ~] ~], [~ ~ sn [~ sn*3]/2]}/2"
 
 mapM_ ($ silence) [d1,d2]
@@ -220,28 +220,70 @@ d1 $ (0.5 <~) $ stack [
 
 d2 $ sound "[wt(5,8)]/4"
 
-d4 $ slowspread ($) [density 3, slow 2] $ whenmod 7 5 rev $ rev . chop 16 $ sound "[bz(3,8)]/2"
+d7 $ whenmod 3 2 (slow 2) $ slow 8 $ every 2 rev $ striate 64 $ sound "ice"
+   |+| cutoff "0.02"
+   |+| resonance "0.001"
+   |+| speed "0.7"
+
+d3 $ whenmod 5 3 (superimpose (0.25 ~>)) $ bassParams $ (0.5 ~>) $ sound "[dubb dubb:1]/2"
+   |+| cut "1"
+   |+| cutoff "0.01"
+   |+| resonance ((/3) <$> slow 4 saw1)
+
+d4 $ whenmod 7 5 rev $ rev . chop 16 $ sound "[bz(3,8)]/2"
    |+| gain "0.7"
-   |+| speed ((+2) <$> density 2.8 sinewave1)
+   |+| speed ((+3) <$> density 2.8 sinewave1)
 
 d1 $ (0.5 <~) $ stack [
-   whenmod 9 2 ((0.25 <~)) $ sound "k:1 k",
+   whenmod 5 4 (density 2) $ whenmod 9 2 ((0.25 <~)) $ sound "~ k",
    (0.75 ~>) $ sound "[~ sn]/2"
 ]
 
-d4 $ slowspread ($) [density 3, slow 2] $ whenmod 7 5 rev $ rev . chop 16 $ sound "[bz(3,8)]/2"
+d3 $ whenmod 5 3 (superimpose (0.25 ~>)) $ bassParams $ (0.5 ~>) $ sound "[dubb dubb:1]/2"
+   |+| cut "1"
+   |+| cutoff "0.01"
+   |+| resonance ((/3) <$> slow 4 saw1)
+   |+| shape ((+0.25).(/2) <$> density 1.5 saw1)
+
+d3 $ whenmod 5 3 (superimpose (0.25 ~>)) $ bassParams $ (0.5 ~>) $ chop 8 $ sound "[dubb dubb:1]/2"
+   |+| cut "1"
+   |+| cutoff "0.01"
+   |+| resonance ((/3) <$> slow 4 saw1)
+   |+| shape ((+0.25).(/2) <$> density 1.5 saw1)
+
+d4 $ whenmod 6 2 (density (4%3)) $ whenmod 7 5 rev $ rev . chop 16 $ sound "[bz(3,8)]/2"
    |+| gain "0.7"
    |+| speed ((+3) <$> density 2.8 sinewave1)
 
-mapM_ ($ silence) [d1,d3]
+d1 $ (0.5 <~) $ stack [
+   whenmod 9 2 ((0.25 <~)) $ sound "~ k",
+   whenmod 10 5 (superimpose (0.25 ~>)) $ (0.75 ~>) $ sound "[~ sn]/2"
+]
 
-hush
+mapM_ ($ silence) [d3,d4]
 
---
+d9 $ (0.25 ~>) $ sound "[~ ~ ~ [~ ~ [~ ~ ~ wtsn] [~ wtsn ~ wtsn]]]/16"
 
-hush
+d8 $ slow 8 $ chop 16 $ bassParams $ sound "[dubb dubb:1]/2"
+   |+| cut "1"
+   |+| speed "0.2"
+   |+| vowel "e"
 
---tbc
+d4 $ whenmod 6 2 (density (4%3)) $ whenmod 7 5 rev $ rev . chop 16 $ sound "[bz(3,8)]/2"
+   |+| gain "0.7"
+   |+| speed ((+3) <$> density 2.8 sinewave1)
+
+d3 $ whenmod 5 3 (superimpose (0.25 ~>)) $ bassParams $ (0.5 ~>) $ chop 8 $ sound "[dubb dubb:1]/2"
+   |+| cut "1"
+   |+| cutoff "0.01"
+   |+| resonance ((/3) <$> slow 4 saw1)
+   |+| shape ((+0.25).(/2) <$> density 1.5 saw1)
+
+d4 $ whenmod 6 2 (density (4%3)) $ whenmod 7 5 rev $ rev . chop 16 $ sound "[bz(3,8)]/2"
+   |+| gain "0.7"
+   |+| speed ((+3) <$> density 2.8 sinewave1)
+   |+| delay "0.3" |+| delayfeedback "0.5" |+| delaytime "1.7249" --(138/60)/4*3
+   |+| pan (density 3.7 sinewave1)
 
 {-
 piston 2.b
@@ -277,8 +319,6 @@ d3 $ density 1.6 $ chop 16 $ bassParams $ sound (samples "[~ dubb]" (slow 4 "0 1
 d3 $ every 2 (density 2) $ density 1.6 $ chop 16 $ bassParams $ sound (samples "[~ dubb]" (slow 4 "0 1"))
    |+| cut "1"
 
-d1 $ sound "k"
-
 d6 $ chop 12 $ sound "[~ ~ [~ k:1] !]/4"
    |+| speed "0.9"
 
@@ -289,18 +329,13 @@ d3 $ every 2 (density 2) $ density 1.6 $ chop 16 $ bassParams $ sound (samples "
    |+| cut "1"
    |+| speed ((+0.75).(/2) <$> slow 1.3 sinewave1)
 
-d1 $ sound "{[k ~ ~ k:1], [~ sn]/2}"
-
-d3 $ within (0.5, 0.75) (|+| vowel "u o") $ every 2 (density 2) $ whenmod 3 2 (density 1.6) $ chop 16 $ bassParams $ sound (samples "[~ dubb]" (slow 4 "0 1"))
-   |+| cut "1"
-   |+| speed ((+0.75).(/2) <$> slow 1.3 sinewave1)
-
 d6 $ whenmod 4 3 (density 1.8) $ chop 12 $ sound "[~ ~ [~ k:1] !]/4"
    |+| speed "0.9"
    |+| shape ((/3) <$> density 3 sinewave1)
 
-d1 $ sound "k:1"
-d3 silence
+d3 $ within (0.5, 0.75) (|+| vowel "u o") $ every 2 (density 2) $ whenmod 3 2 (density 1.6) $ chop 16 $ bassParams $ sound (samples "[~ dubb]" (slow 4 "0 1"))
+   |+| cut "1"
+   |+| speed ((+0.75).(/2) <$> slow 1.3 sinewave1)
 
 let gprop = (|+| speed "1.2").(|+| shape ((/2) <$> ((0.25 ~>) . density 3) sinewave1)).(|+| gain "0.6")
 
@@ -311,6 +346,8 @@ d7 $ rev $ stack [
    |+| pan ((0.5 <~) $ slow 4 sinewave1)
 ]
 
+mapM_ ($ silence) [d1,d3]
+
 d7 $ whenmod 5 3 (slow 1.5) $ rev $ stack [
    smash 64 [0.5,1] $ gprop $ sound "~ gnome"
    |+| pan (slow 4 sinewave1),
@@ -318,6 +355,8 @@ d7 $ whenmod 5 3 (slow 1.5) $ rev $ stack [
    |+| pan ((0.5 <~) $ slow 4 sinewave1)
 ]
 
+d1 $ sound "k:1"
+
 d6 $ whenmod 4 3 (density 1.8) $ chop 12 $ sound "[~ ~ [~ k:1] !]/4"
    |+| speed "0.9"
    |+| shape ((/3) <$> density 3 sinewave1)
@@ -354,13 +393,6 @@ piston 2.c
 
 d1 $ sound "[k k:1 k sn]/2"
 
-d1 $ sound "[[k sn](3,8)]/2"
-
-d1 $ stack [
-   sound "[[k ~ ~ k] ~ k ~]/4",
-   (0.5 ~>) $ sound "[~ sn]/2"
-]
-
 --tbc
 
 {-